Post by whiz on Jul 11, 2010 16:55:32 GMT -6
Subject: Foxheart: Deputy of IvyClan?
Name: Foxheart
Clan: IvyClan
Gender: Tom
Personality: He is a sullen, and depressed sometimes. He is also VERY skittish, He chooses not to interact that much with other warriors, but helps with Apprentices and such. If the clan asked, he would do apprentice jobs for his clan.
Description: small, muscular, reddish tabby tom. He has amber eyes that sparkle in sunlight and shine in the darkness
Parents: Hawksoar: large dark ginger tom
Dappleleaf: pretty light brown she-cat (with darker brown flecks) and green eyes
Littermates: Tanglekit: bright ginger she-cat with a brown underbelly
History: Foxheart has always been sullen and sad since his mother and sister died of blackcough. He caught it too, and lost 5 of his whiskers which had been infected. His father didn't bother with him after his mother's death, and quickly found another she-cat for a mate. He resents his father deeply. He hates his name as it is very disgraceful
Writing Example: "Calm down," Foxheart ordered. "We, um, have to defend the Clan!"
"That's obvious, Mousebrain." A warrior snorted, and a thicket coated golden tom strode to Foxheart. "I think I can take it from here, ok?" He said, voice full of authority.
"No!" Foxheart growled. "Silentstar said I was in charge!"
"Your not doing much of a job, anyway." The golden tom muttered, green eyes blazing. "Let me do the job!"
"No. Don't provoke another fight! Go guard the Queens Den with Pinefall. Beechpath?"
"Yes?"
"Go help the medicine cat. We're bound to have a few cuts. Firefrost?"
"Huh?" Meowed the tom who had insulted him before.
"Go secure the elders. Me, Scorchfang, and Galesky shall keep watch on the gorse tunnel and other openings."
The thick-coated tom still sat there in amazement. He was a young warrior, and yet, all his worry had gone away and he was in authority! What had happened? He wasn't a senior warrior, Bearslash was! So why was he so secure?
"Bearslash? Go already." Foxheart reminded.
"Oh. Yeah." He padded towards Pinefall with the answer in his head.
Somehow, that cat with a disgraceful name, had StarClan walking with him.
Autobiography: I've read the warriors series but recently have seen a decline of effort in writing. Thus, the last book read was Sunrise. I do know what happened in the books, but, I see need to finish a book in 45 minutes: It's a waste of time.
