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Jan 9, 2011 18:45:12 GMT -6
Post by Wå†êrþåw on Jan 9, 2011 18:45:12 GMT -6
[Waterpaw] .:. [Female] .:. [frost clan]
this i know
name Waterpaw
here i call home
clan Frost clan
this i am
gender she~cat
how long i have been
age five moons
they see my skill
position apprentice
my words are heard
personality A friendly cat who like to talk every once and i while. An unusually fast cat for her age. When she hunts she is fast and stealthy. She sleeps as long as possible but never late to a class. She would never defy the warrior code or any superiors unless it meant loss of life. She is often alone or helping with any duties needed.
my reflection torn
description A thin white she~cat with blue eyes. Has a large scar across her entire body (from her nose to tail).
those who came before
parents rustear and cloudclaw they who stand by my side
littermates (only one in litter)
this i have seen
history A young she~cat with a high desire to become a warrior. She has a huge scar from when she was young a huge fox invaded their camp. She protected younger kits as she fought but it almost resulted in death from horrific wounds. She managed to escape with her life and a new huge scar. She was only two moons old. She has been an apprentice almost long enough to become a warrior.
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Jan 9, 2011 21:17:11 GMT -6
Post by Seafeather on Jan 9, 2011 21:17:11 GMT -6
This needs to be in the correct format. Her history, description and personality needs to be longer. You also need a writing example.
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