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Post by Raccoonstar on Jan 9, 2011 16:19:56 GMT -6
This is a song I wrote. Notice the chorus and such. It's early in the morning The fog is dark and thick Awaiting the jay to come on her wing And perform her favorite trick.
The blue jay, with her wordless tune And her priceless melody She will brighten all our days soon And awe us with her majesty.
It's late afternoon now The people are silent as night. Waiting for the skies to allow The blue jay to take flight.
The blue jay, with her song so sweet Brightens us every day. But today it is incomplete. As the jay has flown away.
It is almost dusk and The silence is everywhere Maybe today she has fled the land But then suddenly, she is there.
The blue jay with her pretty tone Has us joining in on her song But then she flies away, leaving us alone. Into the sky, where nothing's wrong.
But the jay will never leave Her song has not been slain And we must never grieve For her loss is others' gain.
The blue jay shares her melody With the others of the world And in all sincerity Her story has just unfurled.
We must pass on her song We must keep it alive. For she would want this to carry along And let it live and thrive.
The blue jay passes on the song To the rest of the world and far beyond And so now there is no wrong For all, the truth has dawned.
The blue jay...the blue jay...the blue jay's song...
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//Sunneh// is FuMiNg
Young Warrior
You can call me "Great One". Most people do.[ss:CatClans]
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Post by //Sunneh// is FuMiNg on Jan 9, 2011 16:43:29 GMT -6
Epic, Coony. I don't know how you and Falling do it. xD I fail at poems. o3o
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Post by Raccoonstar on Jan 9, 2011 16:56:26 GMT -6
;D
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Post by Seafeather on Jan 9, 2011 17:52:27 GMT -6
I have a hard time getting past the happiness of this poem connected to a blue jay. -.-' lol! I like it Cooney though! So no worries! XD I'm just trying to see if there is actually a nice blue jay in this world. Blue jays are mean. O.O I'm not joking...lol!
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Post by Fallinggaze on Jan 9, 2011 18:41:14 GMT -6
Nice :-) and Sunrise, for my rhymes, I use rhyming dictionaries :-) F A I L!!!!
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Post by Raccoonstar on Jan 9, 2011 19:02:50 GMT -6
Does that mean I win at poems? *cheers* lol jk
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Post by Seafeather on Jan 9, 2011 21:41:20 GMT -6
Haha!! That's what i do Falling!! XD
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Post by Raccoonstar on Jan 10, 2011 19:54:24 GMT -6
I winz at poems cuz I don't use a rhyming dictionary. I use my brainz. ;D
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Post by Fallinggaze on Jan 12, 2011 11:27:56 GMT -6
Ya, only my brain is not alw----- good
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Post by Raccoonstar on Jan 12, 2011 11:32:37 GMT -6
My brainz are awesome. That's why I get 4's (equivalent to A's or A+'s) in Writing.
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Post by Fallinggaze on Jan 13, 2011 16:10:11 GMT -6
I'm getting an A+ in writing. BTW.... 250TH POST!!!!!!!!!!!! WOOOOOOOOOOPP WOOOOOOP!!!!Attachments:
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Post by Raccoonstar on Jan 13, 2011 20:19:03 GMT -6
...I'm nearing my 500th post.
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