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Post by Raccoonstar on Dec 29, 2010 1:02:34 GMT -6
You think you are unloved. Never opening up to anyone. Thinking no one knows who you are And far away is where you should run.
So you go upon a journey, And leave all your friends behind. Thinking that you will see paradise. As an existing land to find.
Your journey is long and hard. With trials far and near. But finally you reached it. And thought you had made it here.
But you were chewed up and chewed out; With all the trials and tasks ahead. And you stood there looking at all your lost time Thinking paradise...is dead.
But paradise will always live. Paradise had never died. For paradise always exists Where it counts most; inside.
Knowing this, you do not start again. For now you know what's real. Paradise is everywhere. Paradise is what you feel. [/center]
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Post by Fallinggaze on Dec 29, 2010 7:47:43 GMT -6
Nice! Whenever I try to write poetry, It's really either depressing, or just plain unintelligent.
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Post by Raccoonstar on Dec 29, 2010 10:51:17 GMT -6
This was one of my more depressing poems.
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//Sunneh// is FuMiNg
Young Warrior
You can call me "Great One". Most people do.[ss:CatClans]
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Post by //Sunneh// is FuMiNg on Dec 29, 2010 17:03:55 GMT -6
Awesome, Coony. <3 It reminds me of this anime I watched a few years ago. xD
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