Nightpelt

[reedtail]

name: NightPelt

age: 24 moons

gender: male

clan: frost-clan

personality: Nightpelt is strong and brave. In battle he is first to attack but will wait for the command to attack. Unlike his sister he hates to lay in the sun. Good at catching voles he's best at hunting and fighting. Never really having kits he doesnt understand the importance of them, but does understand that the more kits the more warriors. He protects and defends his clan with his life but much like his sister he argues at the slightest twitch of a whisker.

parents: Whiskertail and Brightthorn

litter mates: Reedtail

Character history: As a kit his parents wanted him to be a warrior. whiskertail took Reedtail to ivy-clans border. Brightthorn happened to be a warrior in frost-clan so she took him. Whiskertail was a outcast so reedtail never knew about her family, but brightthorn told nightpelt. In battle brightthorn couldn't attack reedtail so reedtail killed brightthorn.

Writing exam: Nightpelt raced to where his mother lay dead by the blow of reedtail. "MOM!" he yowled to the wind. Turning around to reedtail he hissed "YOU WILL PAY!". Slashing with his claws he grabbed reedtails ear and bit in. Reedtail yowled and ran into the ivy. Yowling out again Nightpelt dragged his dead mother into the bushes at the frost-clan side of the border.

;D enjoy

[Seafeather]

Okay, we MUST do this. Reedtail is not ReedTail. The "t" is lower case, same with all of the other names. lol! His personality isn't very interesting. He seems like he's just stone. Add a little bit to his personality and he'll be accepted! ^-^

[reedtail]

there you go

[Seafeather]

oh and I forgot to put this in the other post: your RPG posts and the writing example needs to be in 3rd person. The way you have it written is in 1st person, like she's talking to herself. 3rd person is like someone else is talking for them. ----->

Spottedwing said, "This is in 3rd person." She licked her paw and smoothed down her ear tufts. "It's like someone else is speaking for me!" She hopped from her seat and stood in a battle-field ready position.

Still, his personality isn't very...entertaining. Tell how he acts around other cats. How he acts toward elders or kits. How does he act around the leader or deputy? Does he have a dark past that makes him unlikeable to most cats? Things like that. Take a look at some of my applications to get an idea. But no stealing! XD lol!

[reedtail]

modified

[Seafeather]

okay!! ACCEPTED!!!! XD

[fαllεη •]

*Cough* erm, Reed? Nightpelt needs an appearance, and his history is more Reedtail's than his own... ^^;