Post by snowfire on Nov 11, 2010 13:12:43 GMT -6
Subject:Hollypaw 's Application for Medicine Cat Apprentice of Cloudclan
Name: Hollypaw(leaf)
Clan: Cloudclan
Gender: Tom
Personality:
Hollypaw is kind but gets a bit snappish when he is agitated. He has a strange fear of trees and will never climb one, unless he has no choice. Hollypaw doesn't care a bit about his looks though he grooms himself every day so he doesn't seem like a slob.
Description: Hollypaw has a reddish-brown pelt. His eyes are as green as the trees in new-leaf. His fur is neither thin nor fluffy and water doesn't weigh it down. His paws and tail are white and her claws are small, but sharp. She has a scar on her left foreleg from when she fell into a bramble bush as a kit. Hollypaw is a smallish cat for his age of nine moons, the runt of the litter. Some cats at the first gathering he went to, at seven moons, thought that she was a kit!Her tail is as long as any cat of his age, so it appears that he was born with a big tail, not a small body.
Parents: sunpelt,littlewhisker
Littermates: Gorsekit, and Oakkit(all dead)
History: As a kit, Hollypaw was always getting into trouble. He saw nightleaf and smelled the spicy scent of the cave so much that he, himself, wanted to become a Medicine Cat himself when he grew up. Hollypaw's littermates, Gorsekit, and Oakkit weren't interested whatsoever in becoming a Medicine Cat. The two toms just wanted to become warriors. Gorsekit saw a mouse by the nursery one day and chased it off into the woods yowling "I'm gonna catch it and become a Warrior!". He was never seen again. Oakkit also died when he saw some deathberries and consumed them. Twilightmoon tried to save him when they found him by the bush but the berries had already taken their toll on the young kit. He died with a few poppyseeds to ease his journey to StarClan, leaving Hollypaw the last surviving cat of Sunpelt's litter.
Writing Example:
A bloody Tom limped into the Medicine Cat's den. Nightleaf was out collecting herbs, so Hollypaw was the only one present.
"Whitepaw, what happened?" Hollypaw mewed.
"Outsiders... Forest... Ambush..." Whitepaw replied, his blue eyes clouded with anguish.
"Take these. They will ease the pain." Hollypaw took a head of poppy in his teeth and shook out a few of the small black seeds. Whitepaw lapped them up, blinking gratefully at Hollypaw before a dreamless sleep claimed him.
Hollypaw groomed him with his rough pink tongue, looking across his white pelt with his sharp eyes, searching for where the wounds lay. He had several scratches and a his left forepaw was bent weirdly. "Broken..." He sighed. He examined him once more and blinked in relief; he'd survive.
Hollypaw trotted towared the back of the den, only to return with his forepaw swathed in cobwebs, a mouthful of pineneedles, and two sturdy twigs in his teeth. He chewed the pine needles to create a healing salve for Whitepaw's cuts. He transferred the bitter mixture to his bites and scratches then massaged it in with his tongue. Then he pressed the cobwebs into the Tom's scratches to stop the bleeding. Hollypaw straightened out his paw and placed the two twigs on either side of it. He then used his remaining cobweb to wrap the twigs tightly to the sides of his paw, making it temperarily immobile.
He gazed empithetically at the young Tom and set off out of the medicine cat's den to find or to inform of the tragedy.
Name: Hollypaw(leaf)
Clan: Cloudclan
Gender: Tom
Personality:
Hollypaw is kind but gets a bit snappish when he is agitated. He has a strange fear of trees and will never climb one, unless he has no choice. Hollypaw doesn't care a bit about his looks though he grooms himself every day so he doesn't seem like a slob.
Description: Hollypaw has a reddish-brown pelt. His eyes are as green as the trees in new-leaf. His fur is neither thin nor fluffy and water doesn't weigh it down. His paws and tail are white and her claws are small, but sharp. She has a scar on her left foreleg from when she fell into a bramble bush as a kit. Hollypaw is a smallish cat for his age of nine moons, the runt of the litter. Some cats at the first gathering he went to, at seven moons, thought that she was a kit!Her tail is as long as any cat of his age, so it appears that he was born with a big tail, not a small body.
Parents: sunpelt,littlewhisker
Littermates: Gorsekit, and Oakkit(all dead)
History: As a kit, Hollypaw was always getting into trouble. He saw nightleaf and smelled the spicy scent of the cave so much that he, himself, wanted to become a Medicine Cat himself when he grew up. Hollypaw's littermates, Gorsekit, and Oakkit weren't interested whatsoever in becoming a Medicine Cat. The two toms just wanted to become warriors. Gorsekit saw a mouse by the nursery one day and chased it off into the woods yowling "I'm gonna catch it and become a Warrior!". He was never seen again. Oakkit also died when he saw some deathberries and consumed them. Twilightmoon tried to save him when they found him by the bush but the berries had already taken their toll on the young kit. He died with a few poppyseeds to ease his journey to StarClan, leaving Hollypaw the last surviving cat of Sunpelt's litter.
Writing Example:
A bloody Tom limped into the Medicine Cat's den. Nightleaf was out collecting herbs, so Hollypaw was the only one present.
"Whitepaw, what happened?" Hollypaw mewed.
"Outsiders... Forest... Ambush..." Whitepaw replied, his blue eyes clouded with anguish.
"Take these. They will ease the pain." Hollypaw took a head of poppy in his teeth and shook out a few of the small black seeds. Whitepaw lapped them up, blinking gratefully at Hollypaw before a dreamless sleep claimed him.
Hollypaw groomed him with his rough pink tongue, looking across his white pelt with his sharp eyes, searching for where the wounds lay. He had several scratches and a his left forepaw was bent weirdly. "Broken..." He sighed. He examined him once more and blinked in relief; he'd survive.
Hollypaw trotted towared the back of the den, only to return with his forepaw swathed in cobwebs, a mouthful of pineneedles, and two sturdy twigs in his teeth. He chewed the pine needles to create a healing salve for Whitepaw's cuts. He transferred the bitter mixture to his bites and scratches then massaged it in with his tongue. Then he pressed the cobwebs into the Tom's scratches to stop the bleeding. Hollypaw straightened out his paw and placed the two twigs on either side of it. He then used his remaining cobweb to wrap the twigs tightly to the sides of his paw, making it temperarily immobile.
He gazed empithetically at the young Tom and set off out of the medicine cat's den to find or to inform of the tragedy.
