Post by Kat on Jul 7, 2010 20:42:58 GMT -6
PLEASE, COPY THIS FROM THE BROWN BOX UNDERNEATH
The bio below is an example. Do not copy it, please.
(Otherwise it looks rather unpleasant ;))
When applying for a spot in one of the clans please use this format. If you do not, we will not accept your application.
For the subject of your application, please use this format: [/font]
[Name] .:. [gender] .:. [clan]
[/font][/center] this i know
name
Thunderheart
here i call home
clan
SnakeClan
this i am
gender
tom
how long i have been
age
eighteen moons
they see my skill
position
warrior
my words are heard
personality
Thunderheart is one of the most handsome cats in his clan, and he has let it get to his head. He flirts like no tomorrow, and doesn't plan on settling down and finding a mate. Some toms look up to him, while others ignore him. However, when he isn't flirting, he's fun to be around. He will talk about anything and everything.
While there are some things that don't apply to Thunderheart, there is one thing that is true- he is fiercely loyal. Normally he goofs off- but when it's time to be serious, Thunderheart shows his true self- smart, accepting, and strong.
my reflection torn
description
A large brown and black stripped tom with gleaming amber eyes. His ears tips, tail tip, and paws are pitch black.
those who came before
parents
Galesong and Blackwhisher
they who stand by my side
littermates
Skyleaf, Firelily, Finchpaw
this i have seen
history
Growing up, Thunderheart was adored: by his mother, his father, and the elders. To them, Thunderheart was destined for greatness. He knew it, too- he could get away with just about anything anything. All it took was a wink of an eye and he took none of the blame.
If ever asked what he loves the most, the answer would most definitely be his siblings. He adored Skyleaf and Firelily, they meant the world to him. He was protective over his brother, too- no one messed with Finchpaw and got away with it. He was devastated when his brother died, not only because he had lost his brother, but also because of the effect it had on his sisters. He is now more overprotective then ever.
As an apprentice, Thunderheart did well when he had no distractions. He was skilled, but his mind was not always on helping the clan. He often was late for practice, and skipped dawn patrol because he would sleep in. His mentor got mad at him a lot for being so irresponsible. He has become more responsible as a warrior, but is known for being late for patrol every now and again.
[center] [font=Penshurst]this i know[/font] [/center]
[font=Teen]name[/font]
[font= Teen light] INSERT NAME HERE[/font]
[center] [font= Penshurst] here i call home [/font] [/center]
[font=Teen] clan [/font]
[font= teen light] INSERT CLAN HERE [/font]
[center] [font=Penshurst] this i am [/font] [/center]
[font=teen] gender [/font]
[font=teen light] INSERT GENDER HERE {tom= male} {she-cat=female} [/font]
[center] [font=Penshurst] how long i have been [/font] [/center]
[font=teen] age [/font]
[font=teen light] INSERT AGE HERE (If you are a kit, you must be under 6 moons, if you're an apprentice, you must be under twelve moons, if you are a warrior, you must be over 12 moons) [/font]
[center] [font=Penshurst] they see my skill [/font] [/center]
[font=teen] position [/font]
[font=teen light] INSERT POSITION HERE {warrior, kit, apprentice, queen, elder NO LEADERS, DEPUTIES, OR MEDICINE CATS AVAILABLE} [/font]
[center] [font=Penshurst] my words are heard [/font] [/center]
[font=teen] personality [/font]
[font=teen light] INSERT PERSONALITY DESCRIPTION HERE A brief description on personality. Please, no paragraphs, but do more than one sentence. four or five sentences would be a good number to shoot for. [/font]
[center] [font=Penshurst] my reflection torn [/font] [/center]
[font=teen] description [/font]
[font=teen light] INSERT PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION HERE physical description. example: lean tom with long legs and brownish- black fur. amber eyes that shine even in the darkness. [/font]
[center] [font=Penshurst] those who came before [/font] [/center]
[font=teen] parents [/font]
[font=teen light] INSERT PARENTS HERE Parents of your cat. the parents DO NOT have to be actually role-played, they could be dead or made up. Please, don't have one parent (or both, for that matter) be a loner or rouge or kittypet. Most clans DON'T accept half-clan cats. Unless you are playing as a special charector, your parents won't be that important. [/font]
[center] [font=Penshurst] they who stand by my side [/font] [/center]
[font=teen] littermates [/font]
[font=teen light] INSERT LITTERMATES HERE [/font]
[center] [font=Penshurst] this i have seen [/font] [/center]
[font=teen] history [/font]
[font=teen light] INSERT HISTORY HERE What has happened in your cat's life so far. It would be interesting if something interesting has happened, but nothing too tramatic. I don't really want to see that as a young kit your cat's mother, father, littermates, and three best friends were pushed off a cliff by his/her arch-enemy and your cat is now untrustworthy, depressed, and driven by revenge. KEEP IT REAL, PEOPLE. Please, more than one paragraph, if you can manage. Three sentences WILL NOT cut it. [/font]
[center] [font=Penshurst] these my words [/font] [/center]
[font=teen] role-play example [/font]
[font=teen light] INSERT EXAMPLE HERE a small example of your writing. The content will not matter as much as your grammar will. We want to make sure that you are at least semi-literate. I highly advise against tlkin like this bc u wnt b acceptd. We want people who have passed fifth grade english, please. It would be nice if it was from your charector's POV. More than a paragraph, please. [/font]
[center] [font=Penshurst] they who controls me [/font] [/center]
[font=teen] autobiography [/font]
[font=teen light] INSERT DESCRIPTION OF SELF HERE This is optional, but it would be wise to fill out] A little bit about yourself, if it's your first time. No personal information, such as where you live, how old you are, ect. Just tell me if you've read the warriors series, why you like it, some hobbies you have, and things that interest you, interesting things about you. Something you would tell everyone at your first day of school at a new school.[/font]
Thank all of you who use this format!!!
~!~Note~!~
If I suggest for you to do something, it means- do it. If you don't, I will presume that you don't want to put the time, effort, and care into your character and therefore into the site. :3