Post by Fallinggaze on Sept 4, 2010 9:36:19 GMT -6
Name: Ashtail
Age: 75 moons
Clan: FrostClan
Gender: Tom
Position: Almost an elder (Eyesight failing, needs to retire early)
Personality: Ashtail is a tom who loves to eat. He hunts a lot to keep him from slowing down at battles. Speaking of battles, he is sneaky, and fast when it comes to battles. Sadly, he's not the best at injuring, nor killing. But he's still good at hunting. He's kind and shy, and can be inpatient, though he still can be a good friend (if you don't talk to him on the early patrols).
Description: Short and kind of tubby, brown cat. He has a black tail, at the base of the tail, where the brown and black meet, there are black specks (not that you'd look there on a cat.) His eyes are blue, which brings out the brightness of his personality. He has a scar across his mouth, so he doesn't speak much.
Parents: Strongpelt (tom) and Sweetie (the queen) One day, when Sweetie was hunting (was Orangemoon then.) she heard Twolegs. They saw her, and took her, Ashtail was only an apprentice. Strongpelt disappeared one day, they think that a badger may have taken him.
Littermates: FlowerPelt (She-cat) and OwlFace (tom)
History: Ashtail has had one apprentice, named FallingPaw (FallingGaze now) Ashtail enjoyed training her, for she was an excellent apprentice. One day, when there was a battle, Ashtail was on a role, he had made 3 cats flee, and gave a giant scar on another cat's back. A cat snuck up behind him, and he turned, and was scratched deeply in the mouth, which was how he got his scar.
Writing Example: (This is what I have so far at a story about a badger) Chini
The light breeze of Summer flew through my fur. I stepped out from last few
steps of my hole as I listened to the chirping of birds and the cicadas chitter. I was
about to dig for worms only, I realized that I heard a sound. I looked south; where the
sound came from. I saw another badger staring at me. She was black with white stripes
and had brown eyes.
"Wateule," said the badger with a sweet voice. "I am Tamu. You do not know
of me. But I know of you. Don't be alarmed, I am not here to hurt you," I stared as I
listened. "I come from Chini. A palace underneath. We ask- we plead- we BEG of you to
come join us, Wateule.
"But why me?" I asked? I didn't bother asking how they knew my name, there
were other things to ask.
"Wateule," began Tamu. "Do you know what your name means?"
"Uh, I dunno, Wateule? Am I right?"
"No, you're name means 'Chosen' in Swahili." She paused a second. "Who
named you?"
"My aunt,"
Well, that's all I have so far, so ;D
Age: 75 moons
Clan: FrostClan
Gender: Tom
Position: Almost an elder (Eyesight failing, needs to retire early)
Personality: Ashtail is a tom who loves to eat. He hunts a lot to keep him from slowing down at battles. Speaking of battles, he is sneaky, and fast when it comes to battles. Sadly, he's not the best at injuring, nor killing. But he's still good at hunting. He's kind and shy, and can be inpatient, though he still can be a good friend (if you don't talk to him on the early patrols).
Description: Short and kind of tubby, brown cat. He has a black tail, at the base of the tail, where the brown and black meet, there are black specks (not that you'd look there on a cat.) His eyes are blue, which brings out the brightness of his personality. He has a scar across his mouth, so he doesn't speak much.
Parents: Strongpelt (tom) and Sweetie (the queen) One day, when Sweetie was hunting (was Orangemoon then.) she heard Twolegs. They saw her, and took her, Ashtail was only an apprentice. Strongpelt disappeared one day, they think that a badger may have taken him.
Littermates: FlowerPelt (She-cat) and OwlFace (tom)
History: Ashtail has had one apprentice, named FallingPaw (FallingGaze now) Ashtail enjoyed training her, for she was an excellent apprentice. One day, when there was a battle, Ashtail was on a role, he had made 3 cats flee, and gave a giant scar on another cat's back. A cat snuck up behind him, and he turned, and was scratched deeply in the mouth, which was how he got his scar.
Writing Example: (This is what I have so far at a story about a badger) Chini
The light breeze of Summer flew through my fur. I stepped out from last few
steps of my hole as I listened to the chirping of birds and the cicadas chitter. I was
about to dig for worms only, I realized that I heard a sound. I looked south; where the
sound came from. I saw another badger staring at me. She was black with white stripes
and had brown eyes.
"Wateule," said the badger with a sweet voice. "I am Tamu. You do not know
of me. But I know of you. Don't be alarmed, I am not here to hurt you," I stared as I
listened. "I come from Chini. A palace underneath. We ask- we plead- we BEG of you to
come join us, Wateule.
"But why me?" I asked? I didn't bother asking how they knew my name, there
were other things to ask.
"Wateule," began Tamu. "Do you know what your name means?"
"Uh, I dunno, Wateule? Am I right?"
"No, you're name means 'Chosen' in Swahili." She paused a second. "Who
named you?"
"My aunt,"
Well, that's all I have so far, so ;D
