Post by Raccoonstar on Aug 4, 2010 21:18:41 GMT -6
Subject: Falconpaw's Application for (drum roll please) an apprentice XD
Name: Falconpaw
Clan: SnakeClan
Gender: Tom
Personality: He is very energetic, and this often gets him into trouble. His energy makes his speed great, but his stamina awful. He hopes he can learn to have both great stamina and great speed. He is always either happy or angry, never anything else, and his eyes are always bright with happiness.
Description: He is a small apprentice, but his energy makes up for it. His pelt always seems bright, even though it's a dusky grayish blue. His eyes are bright yellow, and seem to get brighter every day. His right ear is torn from the battle with IvyClan (see writing example) but he never cared. He also has a deep scratch on his left eye, making it impossible to open, but he still doesn't care.
Parents: Brokenclaw-father, Cougarheart-mother
Littermates: they aren't role-played, and are unimportant...but they are Birchpaw, Toadpaw, and Rosepaw.
History: He has always been a cheerful soul, even when he was struck with greencough when he was a kit. Most thought he would die, but even after hearing this news, he could still laugh at any joke, even through bits of coughing. Once he was cured, he was still frail for a few moons, so Raccoonstar postponed his apprenticeship. Everyone thought that he would be mad, but he agreed. He is only mad if he needs to be, in battle. He always fought in any battles harder than most warriors, so he is often picked to go on war patrols or ambushes.
Writing Example: "We have to be extremely quiet," Raccoonstar said. "If IvyClan hears us, our ambush is ruined. Understand, Falconpaw?"
"Yeah," Falconpaw whispered. He went up to the leader and padded with him, ready for the attack. The Clan finally found the back way into IvyClan camp. They all launched in, Falconpaw being first to come in. "Ooh. An apprentice. I'm so afraid!" one IvyClan warrior sneered. He launched at him in a battle cry that terrified some. He scratched his pelt and face, and he saw Raccoonstar and the other SnakeClan members rush in. The IvyClan cat managed to get one good blow to Falconpaw's ear before he retreated. Ouch! His ear screamed in pain, but he rushed in to another warrior. He saw that Raccoonstar was in trouble! He slammed into the warrior, and Raccoonstar took a shallow breath and said, "I got it, Falconpaw..." Falconpaw rushed off to fight a warrior that was going to ambush a SnakeClan warrior! He slammed into the cat, knocking the wind out of him, then he scratched his face multiple times before Raccoonstar yelled, "Retreat! We have done enough!" Falconpaw snickered at the injured warrior, the one that had snickered at him, and padded off. "Falconpaw," Raccoonstar softly spoke. "That was amazing, but I think you should talk to Skyleaf about that ear. And your eye...did a warrior tear it? Skyleaf should look at that too."
"Okay," His eye? He tried to open it, but noticed he couldn't. He hadn't even noticed! Oh well. Just another battle scar! Once they got back to camp, he bounced to Skyleaf. "Raccoonstar told me that you should look at my ear and my eye." he said happily. He thought of the wounds not as something to be ashamed of, but as his first real battle scars. He would treasure them forever and a moon.
Autobiography: how cool is dis kitteh?! and i think i can RP as two of my cats in one application!
Name: Falconpaw
Clan: SnakeClan
Gender: Tom
Personality: He is very energetic, and this often gets him into trouble. His energy makes his speed great, but his stamina awful. He hopes he can learn to have both great stamina and great speed. He is always either happy or angry, never anything else, and his eyes are always bright with happiness.
Description: He is a small apprentice, but his energy makes up for it. His pelt always seems bright, even though it's a dusky grayish blue. His eyes are bright yellow, and seem to get brighter every day. His right ear is torn from the battle with IvyClan (see writing example) but he never cared. He also has a deep scratch on his left eye, making it impossible to open, but he still doesn't care.
Parents: Brokenclaw-father, Cougarheart-mother
Littermates: they aren't role-played, and are unimportant...but they are Birchpaw, Toadpaw, and Rosepaw.
History: He has always been a cheerful soul, even when he was struck with greencough when he was a kit. Most thought he would die, but even after hearing this news, he could still laugh at any joke, even through bits of coughing. Once he was cured, he was still frail for a few moons, so Raccoonstar postponed his apprenticeship. Everyone thought that he would be mad, but he agreed. He is only mad if he needs to be, in battle. He always fought in any battles harder than most warriors, so he is often picked to go on war patrols or ambushes.
Writing Example: "We have to be extremely quiet," Raccoonstar said. "If IvyClan hears us, our ambush is ruined. Understand, Falconpaw?"
"Yeah," Falconpaw whispered. He went up to the leader and padded with him, ready for the attack. The Clan finally found the back way into IvyClan camp. They all launched in, Falconpaw being first to come in. "Ooh. An apprentice. I'm so afraid!" one IvyClan warrior sneered. He launched at him in a battle cry that terrified some. He scratched his pelt and face, and he saw Raccoonstar and the other SnakeClan members rush in. The IvyClan cat managed to get one good blow to Falconpaw's ear before he retreated. Ouch! His ear screamed in pain, but he rushed in to another warrior. He saw that Raccoonstar was in trouble! He slammed into the warrior, and Raccoonstar took a shallow breath and said, "I got it, Falconpaw..." Falconpaw rushed off to fight a warrior that was going to ambush a SnakeClan warrior! He slammed into the cat, knocking the wind out of him, then he scratched his face multiple times before Raccoonstar yelled, "Retreat! We have done enough!" Falconpaw snickered at the injured warrior, the one that had snickered at him, and padded off. "Falconpaw," Raccoonstar softly spoke. "That was amazing, but I think you should talk to Skyleaf about that ear. And your eye...did a warrior tear it? Skyleaf should look at that too."
"Okay," His eye? He tried to open it, but noticed he couldn't. He hadn't even noticed! Oh well. Just another battle scar! Once they got back to camp, he bounced to Skyleaf. "Raccoonstar told me that you should look at my ear and my eye." he said happily. He thought of the wounds not as something to be ashamed of, but as his first real battle scars. He would treasure them forever and a moon.
Autobiography: how cool is dis kitteh?! and i think i can RP as two of my cats in one application!
