Post by Raccoonstar on Aug 2, 2010 20:56:49 GMT -6
Name: Rivershadow
Age: 17 moons
Clan: FrostClan
Gender: Tom
Position: Warrior
Personality: Rivershadow is usually pure stone when it comes to emotions, but if you can get him to love, he will love whoever does with all of his being. He is rough in both hunting and fighting, always making the enemy leave with a blood trail. He is ruthless on planned attacks and vengeful on unplanned ones, because usually someone gets hurt. He never does for some reason. Secretly, he doesn't believe in StarClan, but he's a good warrior and might go there anyways.
Description: Tough looking tom with blue-gray fur with black flecks. Has blackish silver claws that can freak young cats out and blackish blue eyes that makes Rivershadow nearly impossible to see.
Parents: Longfang, (father) Arcticbreeze (mother)
Littermates: Streampaw (dead) and Lakepelt. (They were called the water trio when they were apprentices.)
History: When Rivershadow was the simple Riverpaw, a cat long dead, he was cheerful and he even loved a cat. She had the name of...he barely remembers the name now...the name of...Bronzepaw. He loved Bronzepaw, but when she was killed along with Streampaw in an IvyClan ambush, he became angry at IvyClan, and eventually, everyone. He never trusted anyone ever again. Not even his own family. He never loved anyone ever again. He became more of a rock or a shadow than a cat. His warrior name thus became Rivershadow, as a reminder of what he became and what he once was.
Writing Example: Rivershadow woke to a cat being uncomfortably close to him. Was that Goldenheart, Bronzepaw's sister? Did she like him or something? Yuck. He hated her. But he hated everyone nowadays. "What are you doing here?" he asked, disgusted.
"Snuggling close to you. I like you a lot you know." she said joyously.
"Ugh. Why don't you just leave now!" she commented.
"Because I love you, silly! I think your a cutie!"
"Go away!"
"No. Your awesome, and you know it, cutie! I love you and I always will, cutie!"
"Your never going to go, are you?"
"Nope. Hee hee!"
"Ugh!! Go away-" he paused to look at her, and saw something he never had before in her. He saw her eyes, her gorgeous golden eyes. And he felt something he hadn't felt since Bronzepaw was alive, love. He did love her, and she loved him back. This was wonderful! He loved her, and she loved him back! He was finally happy. Until, of course, she was attacked by a badger and died. I think that deserves a Nelson HAW HAW!
So now Rivershadow's all hard again, just as he was before.
Autobiography: omg was that cheesy and stupid! but oh well. at least he's a good character. XD
Age: 17 moons
Clan: FrostClan
Gender: Tom
Position: Warrior
Personality: Rivershadow is usually pure stone when it comes to emotions, but if you can get him to love, he will love whoever does with all of his being. He is rough in both hunting and fighting, always making the enemy leave with a blood trail. He is ruthless on planned attacks and vengeful on unplanned ones, because usually someone gets hurt. He never does for some reason. Secretly, he doesn't believe in StarClan, but he's a good warrior and might go there anyways.
Description: Tough looking tom with blue-gray fur with black flecks. Has blackish silver claws that can freak young cats out and blackish blue eyes that makes Rivershadow nearly impossible to see.
Parents: Longfang, (father) Arcticbreeze (mother)
Littermates: Streampaw (dead) and Lakepelt. (They were called the water trio when they were apprentices.)
History: When Rivershadow was the simple Riverpaw, a cat long dead, he was cheerful and he even loved a cat. She had the name of...he barely remembers the name now...the name of...Bronzepaw. He loved Bronzepaw, but when she was killed along with Streampaw in an IvyClan ambush, he became angry at IvyClan, and eventually, everyone. He never trusted anyone ever again. Not even his own family. He never loved anyone ever again. He became more of a rock or a shadow than a cat. His warrior name thus became Rivershadow, as a reminder of what he became and what he once was.
Writing Example: Rivershadow woke to a cat being uncomfortably close to him. Was that Goldenheart, Bronzepaw's sister? Did she like him or something? Yuck. He hated her. But he hated everyone nowadays. "What are you doing here?" he asked, disgusted.
"Snuggling close to you. I like you a lot you know." she said joyously.
"Ugh. Why don't you just leave now!" she commented.
"Because I love you, silly! I think your a cutie!"
"Go away!"
"No. Your awesome, and you know it, cutie! I love you and I always will, cutie!"
"Your never going to go, are you?"
"Nope. Hee hee!"
"Ugh!! Go away-" he paused to look at her, and saw something he never had before in her. He saw her eyes, her gorgeous golden eyes. And he felt something he hadn't felt since Bronzepaw was alive, love. He did love her, and she loved him back. This was wonderful! He loved her, and she loved him back! He was finally happy. Until, of course, she was attacked by a badger and died. I think that deserves a Nelson HAW HAW!
So now Rivershadow's all hard again, just as he was before.
Autobiography: omg was that cheesy and stupid! but oh well. at least he's a good character. XD
