Post by Raccoonstar on Oct 17, 2010 20:03:12 GMT -6
this i know
name
Shadowstrike
here i call home
clan
FrostClan
this i am
gender
Tom
how long i have been
age
25 moons
they see my skill
position
Warrior
my words are heard
personality
Shadowstrike defies his name. He is kind and calm, always stopping fights, never starting them. He is friendly among other cats, but leaves them alone if they wish to be alone. His hunting skills are usually dependent on the temperature of the day, if it is warm, he will catch a lot of prey because he is comfortable, and if it is cold, he will catch less prey because he hates sitting in the cold. He cannot fight well until he feels true fury or the call of battle. Then, he is a dark whirl of claws and teeth.
my reflection torn
description
Black tom with muscular shoulders and back legs. He has a skinny middle that can be a target for enemies. His eyes are dusky blue, making him blend into the darkness of night.
those who came before
parents
Mistfur (father-dead) and Whitefeather (mother-dead)
they who stand by my side
littermates
Dawnheart
this i have seen
history
When Shadowstrike was just Shadowkit, he often was avoided by everyone except his sister for his foreboding presence. This left him socially awkward in kit-hood, and after his parents died because of blackcough, they only had each other. When Shadowkit became Shadowpaw, he became more social toward the other apprentices, because after they got to know him, they accepted him. Dawnheart, then Dawnpaw, never reached this stage and was still socially awkward. Shadowpaw persuaded others to befriend her, but Dawnpaw responded bitterly to all of their kind acts. When both siblings were made into warriors, Dawnheart's social status became permanent, and this made Dawnheart even more bitter and angry. She was only calm around Shadowstrike. After about three moons, she got into a fight with one of the warriors, and Shadowstrike did nothing, fearing that he might get hurt. Dawnheart became so insulted that she left FrostClan forever. She padded off into the woods, toward CloudClan territory, where she never returned. Shadowstrike felt responsible for her leaving, because he didn't stop the fight, and was sorrowful for a long time. Many moons later, he saw her at a Gathering, and she was happy there. He cheered up from her calmness and lack of anxiety, and returned to his now friendly state.
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autobiography
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this i know
name
Eclipsepaw
here i call home
clan
IvyClan
this i am
gender
She-cat
how long i have been
age
4 moons
they see my skill
position
Apprentice
my words are heard
personality
Eclipsepaw is a mysterious cat that currently has no friends. If a cat tries to befriend her, she will ask the cat an impossible question, and if the cat cannot answer, she abandons the cat. If any cat answers correctly, Eclipsepaw thinks that this cat must know everything, so she will never leave that cat's side, always asking questions and seeking knowledge until the cat abandons her. Eclipsepaw's hunting skills and battle skills vary with the moon. At full moon, her senses are heightened and she is a great fighter and hunter, but at new moon, she is unfocused and could barely catch a mouse that was already dead.
my reflection torn
description
Eclipsepaw has white fur with a large and circular spot on her side that is surrounded with gray, so it appears as if a black-and-white eclipse is happening on her side. Her eyes are a pale lavender that appear blue at new moon, silver at full moon, and a mixture of the three on an eclipse.
those who came before
parents
Scarfang (father-dead) and Mellowsky (mother-dead)
they who stand by my side
littermates
Sapphirekit, Blackkit, and Foxkit (all dead)
this i have seen
history
Eclipsepaw was born alone. There were no kits beside her, as her quickly opened eyes had announced. He eyes had been dusky purple then, but she stared at an eclipse that had happened on her birth, and they turned blueish-purple, with a sparkle that showed hints of silver. After the eclipse, her eyes had stayed light from the sun's rays, and remain light to this day. Her markings of an eclipse seemed to be a warning to other cats, so they stayed away from her, making her socially awkward. She used her spare time (she had a lot of it without apprentice interruptions) to contemplate her place in the universe, and in doing so, she has learned the ultimate question of the universe, and has been seeking an answer ever since she found it. She also became slightly insane from doing so, and even more socially outcasted.
However, she has relies on her half-sister, Leopardkit, more than even her mother or father. They are inseperable, always one needing the other. She needed no question to know that her sister was a wonderful cat, it came to her naturally.
Still four moons old, Eclipsekit still as a lot to learn in life -like were the dirtplace is, and that the lump on the other side of the nursery is a sleeping cat that does not wnat to be awakened; But even as innocence doesn't last very long, Eclipsepaw is quick to get rid of it. Her time in the nursery is hollow, and usually spent by herself, independently, and occasionally by Leopardkit.
Leopardkit was not as much of an outcast as she seemed to be, but Eclipsepaw stuck by her side like spilt honey, and she grew soft and lowered her tight shield once in awhile to include Leopardkit in her thoughts. Eclipsepaw didn't care that she was born from a different litter than her, and that Mellowsky had only taken Leopardkit in out of pity. It didn't matter she wasn't her real sister, not while they were together.
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this i know
name
Arcticdawn
here i call home
clan
SnakeClan
this i am
gender
She-cat
how long i have been
age
36 moons
they see my skill
position
Warrior
my words are heard
personality
Arcticdawn is fairly quiet. She keeps to herself, avoiding cats as much as she can. She loves hunting, mostly for the calm and quiet that comes along with it. She always catches something that is unusual or off-color, like a white squirrel or a white raven. She doesn't know why these strange creatures are attracted to her, and no one really cares as long as they are tasty. Her battle skills are..well, you wouldn't want her in battle. She hates fighting, because the large amount of movement heat her up to the point in which she cannot move.
my reflection torn
description
Tall she-cat with muscular back legs. Her fur is short and pure white and her whiskers are short. Her eyes are a green-brown shade, and some cats find them attractive.
those who came before
parents
Rainfang (father) and Heronfeather (mother)
they who stand by my side
littermates
none
this i have seen
history
When Arctickit was born, her eyes opened late, but she knew that nobody was around her. At the instant of birth, she knew she would be an only child. As she grew up, she became lonelier and lonelier until she was at the point of ending her life. This was when she met Echokit. Echokit was from IvyClan, and ever since they met, they had been best friends. The two spent hours together, playing and talking. Once both became apprentices, they started spending less and less time together, until one day Echokit, now Echopaw, said that they couldn't be friends anymore because they were in different Clans. After that, Arcticpaw was devastated and wouldn't move from her den for days. The two finally met in battle when they were warriors, (see Falconpaw's writing example, Arcticdawn was in that raid.) and they sneaked off to a clearing that was split by the territories. The two reconnected instantly, and Echopaw, now Echospirit, told Arcticdawn all about what she had missed, and vice versa. But then the battle ended, and the two separated forever. Arcticdawn was going to meet her in the canyon three moons later, but all she found was the impaled body of her friend. Arcticdawn sat there for hours, crying for her lost friend. But she knew that the law of life was that all things must pass, so she gave Echospirit a proper burial, and left her in the clearing that the two had first met upon, her body half in SnakeClan and half in IvyClan.
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